I have put my store up for critique on Etsy and have had some helpful tips so far. I was quite worried about being criticised but everyone has been very kind. It has given me some things to think about, I will be putting these things into action over the next week or so.
Please feel free to take a look at my store http://www.etsy.com/shop.php?user_id=12340 and critique or leave helpful tips and suggestions in the forum http://www.etsy.com/forums_thread.php?thread_id=5476096
Thank you for looking.